tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27497868.post362229404745824613..comments2023-06-05T07:28:26.255-07:00Comments on I am alive.: Some parts need work. Some parts are good. But it made her smile.S. Kahlonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14707199848217411540noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27497868.post-41184719735289681982010-06-01T03:14:30.834-07:002010-06-01T03:14:30.834-07:00oooooh lovely!!!:)
xxoooooh lovely!!!:)<br />xxRand Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04155774525125580472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27497868.post-87768692621746300362010-05-26T20:12:25.327-07:002010-05-26T20:12:25.327-07:00I hope she hangs it on her wall; it seems like exa...I hope she hangs it on her wall; it seems like exactly what she needed.<br /><br />Middle school is the worst, but you're the best, so it evens out.<br /><br /><br />(I think you know the lines that aren't the strongest, and I trust your intuition for it to just take one edit to clear it up. Plus, I hate being critical in places like blog comments. Plus, I think you're just a great poet so I feel weird saying critical things. The end.)Allyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06555162592854784928noreply@blogger.com